Even for someone who's never seen a single episode of Smallville, that was very pretty and very bittersweet. The narrative was *wonderfully* clear, even to me, which is quite an accomplishment. And I thought you did a great job with lyric ties.
My favorite was "bible didn't mention us", and really the only reason I got the full impact of that one was because someone had explained the meaning of the symbol to me. It really drives home the point of an ill-fated relationship and how destiny hasn't chosen her/them.
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Date: 2007-11-12 04:19 pm (UTC)My favorite was "bible didn't mention us", and really the only reason I got the full impact of that one was because someone had explained the meaning of the symbol to me. It really drives home the point of an ill-fated relationship and how destiny hasn't chosen her/them.