Excellent! And I heartily agree with wisteria_'s comments as well, esp. re: Sam being less deeply under Kara's skin than Lee. I think Kara is secretly into slow-and-sweet partly because affectionate touch must still be something sort of alien yet still deeply yearned-for, given her childhood history -- abusive mother and a father who wasn't there. (I think she digs that kind of expression of love in a non-romantic relationships, too -- like when Adama brushes her cheek with his hand in the big Kobol reunion, she nearly breaks down. How many times was she ever treated like that by her real mom? Did she have memories of her father treating her that way before he left?)

But romantically speaking, I like how you have her crave exactly the kind of thing which Lee could provide (and wants to, in "Scar"). Intimacy with Lee is an alluring, yet terrifying prospect to her.